Awesome feedback guys thank you very much!
* Blue marker sucks
* Agree that mixing so much media can be a bit much re contrast/styles. Agree the flying logo's are kinda out of place.
* Voice - was used on the last version and it rocked - however I'll take a peak at a few others just she's very easy to listen to and not everyone likes a thuggy rapper imo (a few versions ago we kinda went all out with the hiphop branding/rich media it didn't work ((as)) well)
* I'll take a nother hack at it I'm sure the next one will turn out better as will the sketches/drawing (such a difference between paper/pencils).
* The .mp3 - yeah what you said makes sense, however there are tools out there that go the other way re they only export mp3 not .wav. Converting down after you have a .wav is good - going the other way is bad/pointless. The next video down the page actually explains this well (it's being redone with this style too).
Thanks again appreciate the suggestions +1 to all (edit - I have given out too much rep... will catch up with you few soon).