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Originally Posted by barman
I think you should learn how to write better. Your writing is ... out there. Maybe make some coherent sentences, and stop abusing the " ........."
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yeah i'm a druken sailor with my speech and writing but it's me......i mean i don't use that stuff on my landing pages but maybe i'll scare people from making a comment beacuse I'm so whacked out in my writing..........and using "..........: all the time
are sure don't use that on my landing page in my affiliate offers...you know,
Landing Page (picture my tattooed ass next to a form with a gun in my waistband)
"Check out this fucken mortgage asshole! Yeah I said you! Fill out this form now or my tattooed ass and Bubba are gonna come rip you a new asshole!" I have your IP address and I'll pin point you with my GPS and Google maps in 60 seconds if you don't do........WAIT, YOU BETTER NOT HIT THAT BACK BUTTON
QUESTION OF THE DAY?????????????????????????
should i cut out my cursing and my real persona for the sake of my readers?
or should i brand myself by being my real whacked out self?