Good deal! It's definitely a start! I'm proud of you! (gee thanks Dad!)
Anyhow, I like the look of the header on the Gold Bullion site, but I think you should take the main points and expand on them. Also, make them separate pages. As it is, your page has the appearance of one of those long spammy sales pages we all love to hate.
Here's what I would do:
- Take all the main points you have there, and create pages for each of those points. Add some additional information and links for more info on each page.
- Add a page about Gold Coins. You could talk about their collectors value vs. the intrinsic value of gold
- Do some interlinking between your pages. Say your "Buying Gold Bullion" page mentions the liquidity of gold, link to the "Why to buy gold" page
- Find some high quality sites that have information on gold and put those on a "Additional Resources" page. Outbound links won't hurt. In fact, they can actually help your site.
- Have a news page that runs an RSS feed. Magpie works well for this. Or Carp
- Sign up for some gold affiliate programs (example: Duty Free House)
- Have a gold price chart on your site for people to check the spot price of gold
Good luck!