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i think your landing page looks pretty decent, considering it's your first attempt. although, if i were to point out one flaw, it looks a bit primitive, if you get what i mean. it's simple in a way, but it also looks... kinda primitive/cheap? I dunno if I'm articulating what I'm trying to say, but yeah.
you should take my opinion with a grain of salt, though, as I'm a huge noob as well.
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