I'm new to this forum! Please critique my website

Charles@Swift

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Hi, my name is charles... I'm new to. CPA marketing and I would love some feed back on my website capture page. I'm a nice guy so take it easy on me for the first few rounds. My website is Swift-Money-Methods.com I really need as many peoples honest advice... So please guide me... Don't just tell me it's crap
 


First bit of advice...link up your page, so we don't have to type it into our browser.

Second bit of advice...it would be wise to engage in some conversations before asking for feedback

Third bit of advice...this isnt DP or WF. So just be prepared.
 
and, yes - your page is junk. it needs lots of work and for God's sakes why in the hell are you hosting at godaddy...

<my brain exploded>

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My goal is to capture and audience offering free CPA marketing advice and I'm trying to get them to get 3 CPA offers ( that I provide an email) that way they only pay for the shipping and handling and I make between 88 and 150 dollars
 
Look, if you're selling people CPA advice and you are coming here for advice on your shitty LP it's clear that you pretty much don't know what you're doing.

Basically, you want us to tell you how to better scam people into opting into your program? That pretty much it?
 
Well... It might be scamming but it does not cost them slot of money! I will give the same crappy system I am using for around 9 dollars out of there cc. But yes... Give me advice... Bash me... Just give me sound advice
 
Well... It might be scamming but it does not cost them slot of money! I will give the same crappy system I am using for around 9 dollars out of there cc. But yes... Give me advice... Bash me... Just give me sound advice


do some research. see what other people in your niche are doing ... don't fucking copy them though. but once you see other peeps are doing you will see why you suck fucking ass. get with it or get fucking lost.