Critique of my LP

[JahRuhle]

check out my site tell me what you think and if there is anything I could change... I dont really care if you dont like the show so just stick to the actual flow of the page and just anything you think I could improve on

Jersey Shore News - Everything you need to know about Jersey Shore

 

[papajohn56]

honestly it's not bad, but make sure there's more ways to access older posts, or there's more than one post on the main page. be careful with ads within articles, I see two of the same ads next to eachother: JWOWW NAKED? | Jersey Shore News

I see you linking to the exact article you're in, maybe not a good idea really

 

[justo_tx]

I think you should be banned for having a blog post title "JWOWW Naked" with no actual pictures of her naked. When you get said pics, report back and you might be unbanned.

 

[JahRuhle]

I think you should be banned for having a blog post title "JWOWW Naked" with no actual pictures of her naked. When you get said pics, report back and you might be unbanned.

ya you dont have to worry about that hah

 

[AngryMac]

not about your site but, the free iphone ad's pics are broken

 

[JahRuhle]

not about your site but, the free iphone ad's pics are broken

good looking out, I assume you are talking about the JwoWW one, the link still worked it just wasnt going through the go.php but i fixed that?

Unless there is something im missing...

 

[sgtryan]

just try a different zip submit at a different aff network, your links are fine the advertiser just sucks.

http://offers.tracking202.com/
^^ use it

site looks decent so far, keep up the quality content and get a lot more content going.. you might even want to just make it a Wordpress blog so that you can add content a lot easier and customize your theme easily...

 

[JahRuhle]

just try a different zip submit at a different aff network, your links are fine the advertiser just sucks.

Offers202
^^ use it

site looks decent so far, keep up the quality content and get a lot more content going.. you might even want to just make it a Wordpress blog so that you can add content a lot easier and customize your theme easily...

It is actually a WP blog, I'm still kind of confused. What exactly is wrong with the ads?

 

[soulscience]

agreed with papa, why are you linking out from a page to that same page?

and where are jwoww's tits?

 

[Rooby]

That's WP? I recognize that theme as an old Joomla theme. I guess they converted it, WUTEVRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.