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HarveyJ

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OK, so I kinda suck at the whole web dev side of things. We have established that...
But can people please give me some feedback on the new LP I made?
If it does ok, I'm probably going to publish it to our network in general.

360 Download Center

Still need to put in keywords n what not, but yeah, done a few designs that were split test, this one did the best. I'd like to see if I can make it better with some WF help before I really think about publishing it.


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Just a couple of small things...

The join button should be bigger imo

The background color of the 360 image is slightly different than the background color of the main section, have you tried making the 360 image transparent?

On the support and join pages, the white boxes make things seam out of place. I'm not sure if you'll be able to fix that though.

And last, the site took a bit to load for me. You said that you haven't published it, so maybe its not on your production box or whatnot, or it might be my connection. Just letting you know.
 
HarveyJ said:
OK, so I kinda suck at the whole web dev side of things. We have established that...
But can people please give me some feedback on the new LP I made?
If it does ok, I'm probably going to publish it to our network in general.

360 Download Center

Still need to put in keywords n what not, but yeah, done a few designs that were split test, this one did the best. I'd like to see if I can make it better with some WF help before I really think about publishing it.


:bigear:
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As tweak said, make the join button larger. A lot larger.

Also, list some incentives (different from features). You have features listed (burn full movies and games). Replace that with incentives (with this software, you will never again spend $ on video games or movies!)
 
You need a more apparent call to action (Signup) and a better seperation of content. I threw this together in about 5 minutes...

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Thanks for the feedback guys :)

Can't change the join or the support boxes, unless someone know how I can override the settings from an external page. They're called up in an iframe, as they're the same join box and support page for the whole program.
But yeah, can that be done with some clever javacript or CSS???

Button size I can definitely increase, as well as the title.

Tweak: It's odd that you say that about the console image. I can't see it, but it IS a transparent 24bit PNG heheh I'll tweak my monitor settings, and if I see it, I'll see what I can do to fix it.

aim: I like what you've done there... So I'm gonna nab it :D

Thanks again for the help guys.
I'll post again when I've done the updates so people don't say "Harvey you lazy bastard! You didn't do anything we said!!"
 
Call me picky but the transparency on this image gets messed up...

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It was designed for a white background so you'll have to photoshop it.
 
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