[WTS] 1 Obese Paper

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Here is the deal. I am finishing up this semester at University and I ended up writing a paper on fat people and since I figured it was diet/health related, one of you could use it. The paper is 2622 words and I am willing to part with it for $50.00 as is. It covers:


  • Effects of obesity
  • Causes of obesity
  • Sin Taxes
  • Corn/Wheat subsidies
...and lots of other little things.

However, I recognize that it is not the most article/content ready paper in it's current form and I'm willing to fix it up. For $75 you'll get:


  • The entire original paper
  • A cleaned up version of the paper (removed citations, less jargon, more reader friendly)
  • The paper sectioned up into articles/parts of your choosing
  • Expanded articles/parts of your choosing (up to 750 words total)
This will give you around 3372 words of content for your site/project. I'm very flexible as to what you want done with the paper so you can have it your way.

Before anyone asks here are some samples of the paper...

There is a special word reserved for people in the dictionary who are so fat, that their fat is becoming a danger to their health. Making them obese, or morbidly fat. The problem is not really being fat, it is the fact that when you are beyond fat and entering into obese territory that you start to see problems associated with being obese.

The official definition of being obese for adults is having a body mass index of above thirty. If are an adult and your body mass index is between twenty-five and twenty-nine point nine, then you are officially overweight (Defining). It is worth noting at this point that the body mass index levels for defining obesity are different for children and teenagers, because there are a lot of differences in body fat between boys and girls at those ages.

According to the Center for Disease Control and Prevention, when you become obese, you can look forward to having an increased chance to receive the following gifts: coronary heart disease, type 2 diabetes, endomentrial, breast, and colon cancer, high blood pressure, high total cholesterol, stroke, live disease, gallbladder disease, sleep apnea (breathing stopped during sleep) and other respiratory problems, osteoarthritis (a degeneration of cartilage and its underlying bone within a joint), and gynecological problems (Health Consequences).

What’s worse is that obesity is becoming a widespread problem in America. Depending on what state you live in, as many as thirty-one point four percent of adults around you could be obese. For Pennsylvania, the it’s twenty-seven point seven percent of adults.(Data and Statistics)The figures from the Center for Disease Control and Prevention’s Behavioral Risk Factor Surveillance System collected in 2008 don’t even include the amount of adults who are just overweight, and are likely to become obese themselves.

As usual, just PM if you want to make an offer. I'm only selling this once, so quantities are extremely limited. :1orglaugh: (But forreal, I am). Additionally, you can check out my other thread here.

Thanks!
 


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