Well i (and most other members here) can track our own urls BUT:
1) Unless i set up a specific test for your service, i will be doing many many more types of linkbuilding, plus gaining natural links in the meantime, so will have NO way of knowing what (if any) benefit your package provides.
2)Even if i do set up an isolated test, it will take the best part of a month to know true results. Do you really want to wait that long for a review?
I can not seriously see anyone taking you up on package 1. Your explanation of why you cant offer a report with the 1st package is lacking somewhat as well!
Package 2 is vaguely interesting though. What exactly do you mean by direct links? are they in context links in articles, sidebar links, direct link banners? And is the PR you mention the domain or actual link url?
If you want a review for package 2 PM me your details and i can give you one.