my first squeeze page

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Tobidotman

Tobidotman

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www.nitrostics.com
Here is the link: Introduction to Free Internet Marketing
 I am trying to capture leads [no shit?] for web design and internet marketing [puh-leeze, you don't even know what that is], please review for free marketing ebook [ebook? my favorite word. another favorite of mine: banned], pm after review for ebook [why? you've been banned].
Thank you
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I assume it is so narrow because he is using the optin graphics pack.

That's fine and all, but here is what I suggest.

Move the email optin box input field and submit button above the copy and image! Try to keep it above the fold. If you want you can duplicate the optin input field again below the copy and image.
Don't make people scroll so far for no reason.
 
Squeeze doesn't necessarily mean the page gets squished. The user is supposed to get squeezed.
 
productionhead said:
Its a good page but why do I need to read all that, put in my email, go to my email box and confirm your link, then go to another link and get your ebook when I can just download it from here:

http://www.nitrostics.com/offers/social-madness.zip
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Thus why its a free ebook.... im targetting web noobs and small businesses

Thanks for all the info guys, you're much better than DP here in terms of helping people, will make the changes.
 
Tobidotman said:
Thus why its a free ebook.... im targetting web noobs and small businesses

Thanks for all the info guys, you're much better than DP here in terms of helping people, will make the changes.
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I don't think you understand. You left your ebook all in the open and unprotected. People can easily give it out to the others via the link

"im targeting web noobs"

web noobs targeting web noobs
 
Ebook alert -woop de woop! I want the online monies! lol

Although I do have an aweber account thats wasting away - any success with the list building yet?

Dave
 
Looks like you wanted to make one of those warriorforum-esque long sales pages with the gay highlights and shit, but couldnt come up with enough content so you just narrowed the thing to the size of a newspaper column to make it look long. Next time just get more content ;)
 
So let me see if I got this right...

You are making a squeeze page to get internet marketing newbies to signup, fork over some of their info, so you can sell to them and spam them later, and then they get to download some really bad, common sense filled ebook.

But before you launch your scam empire, you are asking us if you've done it correctly and if we like the look of it. So really, you're not much more than a newbie yourself?

But you're giving advice to other, lower newbies...

I have a better idea, much faster too...

Go to the kitchen, and under the sink there should be a bottle of Bleach. Pour yourself a nice tall glass of the stuff. Maybe add a few ice cubes or sugar for extra zesty flavoring if ya like, and chug, the whole damn thing as fast as you can.

You'd be doing the industry AND society a pretty big favor, and certainly saving the mods here tons of time from deleting your future "offer ends soon" spam ads in a month or two when you label yourself a real GURU at eating out assholes and some marketing too.

Go back to DP you cocksucker. You don't belong here.
 
Tobidotman said:
Guy, i want people to give it out cos my link is in it ...duh....
who u calling a web noob u 10 year old
lol jkz
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This is an example of what happens when you are already pretending to know what you're doing or preaching about, and you're so consumed in your own web of lies, that dishing out any type of witty comeback just comes out garbled and weird, with a bit of fake politeness on the side.
 
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