Is my landing page clear enough?

[Unarmed Gunman]

Acai Lotions

Too busy?

 

[Pr0xyhub]

probably the best call to action ive seen in a long time

 

[kblessinggr]

Well that was a fucking mess... for a moment I thought I was using Internet Explorer 8 Beta 1.

 

[acemenace]

Call to action is good, but needs to be above the fold.

 

[Rage9]

If the interwebs was on an acid trip, that's what you'd get.

 

[ChrisS]

I saw side boob!

 

[larrybn]

Probably not enough colours.

 

[xmcp123]

Well, at least he has google analytics installed.
Nope, not kidding.

 

[Lapris]

LOL!!

:R:

 

[-Bill-]

My desktop overloaded and caught on fire...
wtf

 

[bobsoap]

The animated Favicon is way too much, dude. What were you thinking.

 

[beejeebers]

It needs more stuff...

 

[jryan21]

Is that what they mean when they talk about building a mashup?

 

[tony115]

Very nice! The way that you set up the landing page is by far the best I have ever seen. Great use of left to right reading. You hit all the hot spots. I particularly like how you made the call to action button very prominent. The eye notices it right away. Great job!

 

[$5 Submissions]

Did Jackson Pollock design that page? I bet he used Frontpage. Should have used DW

 

[BlueYonder]

Where do I submit my credit card info?

 

[-Matt-]

I like the whole zen feel of the page.

 

[Bofu2U]

I'm going to my doctor to get my vision checked, the color scheme seemed to temporarily blind me. I think some of the shapes jumped out and scratched my cornia as well.

 

[AdHustler]

I bet that gets a 79% conversion rate

 

[keeper33]

MY EYES!