Looking for serious people to review my CPA LEAD Rap Tune

[Seema]

CPA Lead are giving away $250 to all video testamonials this month

Heres mine.

YouTube - cpalead funny rap song.wmv

any suggestions on how I improve it would be awesome.

 

[conv3rsion]

Dude if thats gonna get $250 then I need to do one.

 

[johnysc430]

This guy sounds like he's gonna fraud a shitload of leads after he finishes that song.

 

[eVandals]

 

[barman]

bro please kill yourself.

 

[Unarmed Gunman]

Most New Rap = Shitty
Your Rap = Shitty Rap
Double negative is a positive, therefore this may be the greatest thing ever.

 

[joevis]

Who let the Mexicans into CPA Lead?

 

[FerrisHilton]

not sure if serious

 

[bullet-ride]

Darius from Romania: YOU ARE PATHETIC.

 

[Jardini]

make monies cpa led dot cum

LOL, please tell me you didn't make that.

 

[TFLNetwork]

$960 YTD

WE FLY HIGH

NO LIE

YOU KNOW THIS

BALLLINNNNNN

 

[eVandals]

Bro this you too? Sounds the same.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3TkKc57TJs&feature=player_embedded

 

[bizkiller]

I like this rap.

 

[Roundabout]

Most New Rap = Shitty
Your Rap = Shitty Rap
Double negative is a positive, therefore this may be the greatest thing ever.

Ain't no double negative in his vid, cracka.

Most New Rap = Very Shitty
His Rap = Very Very Shitty

Very Squared Shitty > Very Shitty

Where am I going with this? Who cares.

 

[Pr0xyhub]

This guy sounds like he's gonna fraud a shitload of leads after he finishes that song.

LOL.. i lold

 

[Unarmed Gunman]

Ain't no double negative in his vid, cracka.

Most New Rap = Very Shitty
His Rap = Very Very Shitty

Very Squared Shitty > Very Shitty

Where am I going with this? Who cares.

Goddamn you're right again. It's like functions. f(x) seems simple enough but I always end up fucking something up.

 

[trakstar]

"Money coming fast as a boo-lit!" LaughOutLoud. But the beat is pretty sick though

 

[Seema]

Most New Rap = Shitty
Your Rap = Shitty Rap
Double negative is a positive, therefore this may be the greatest thing ever.

I has a big sad after your comment

 

[anoko]

I has a big sad after your comment

Don't worry dude...hopefully you get bigger balls and go do over that shit. These guy are basically telling you in a "subtle" way that it needs work

 

[olesh999]

Who let the Mexicans into CPA Lead?

thats not Mexican fag.....
sounds asian you idiot