187 On A MuthaEffin' Splash Page

[vsaxena]

Sent out my first-ever solo ad and now want you to destroy my splash page. I realize I should have done this b4 sending it out, but meh.

It's my FIRST real splash page so... yeah.

SIGHS. Marketing = Hard!

Tnx!

 

[vsaxena]

whoops hostgatorreviewsdeal.com sorry

 

[cheshire]

Better than most noobs attempts. Shrink that header, drop the banner ad. Increase your headline font size. Post this crap in the newbie section of the forum.