Aim,
I repeated ask to send me the draft before you sent out the press release so I can proof read it and change it if it didn't sound right. You did not. I just got a a google alert for the site. I just read the first sentence of that press release and it made no sense. Too aggravated to even finish reading the rest right now. Bad grammar, bad spelling, bad English and the whole thing makes no sense.
PS. I just had someone else read it and it makes no sense to them.
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Eyeryone has different taste of sentences.So i can not comment on it.
We have many writers.all are not same.if you are unhappy with press release taste then i will feed it to my best writer.i am sure you will like her press release.
Yes you had told me to send you the draft before submitting.i have reminded my teammate to send you the draft before going to publish it. But unfortunately he had submitted that without your approval.
So i am again going to manage a fresh one :this time i will first send it to you to approve ,after that i will submit it.
I deeply regret for your inconvenience.
A lot of Thanks to co-operate us.