Can someone kindly critique my Facebook dating ad?

[Netphase]

How in the hell could it be profitable at .01%?

I'm calling bullshit.

4 clicks at $1.75 each..... 1 conversion for $7.25...... profit. :thumbsup:

 

[tehonic]

Ouch, $1.75 a click? screw that. i agree with getting a more attractive female and testing more ads.

 

[chrisjay]

Thanks guys!

Here's the demo I'm targeting...

40-45, male, single, interested in women, US

Is it too broad?

 

[jr_sci]

She looks like a whore. Doesn't she? When your ad says, "Get a girlfriend", stick to the title. Get a picture of a Cute girl. Rest is upto your sales pitch.

 

[MrBradshaw]

 

[andyjean17]

I remember those dayz when I tried running a real matuer campaign and got 7 clicks and 1 conversion and went on WF asking for help to increase my conversion rate.. I got flamed..lol.. Someone told me here never thinking its profitable with only one conversion, its just pure luck get 20-50 conversions first and test, test,test, test, and more test. My affiliate manager told he some times test over 100-200 ad copies and images you can't just create one ad and ask questions and expect for someone to help you..

 

[hedgefund]

split test another 100 images against yours and I guarantee you will get a higher CTR

 

[o hai guyz]

split test another 100 images against yours and I guarantee you will get a higher CTR

split test another 1 image and he'll get a higher CTR ...

 

[Scheme]

Honestly, I have seen BBW anchor text work really well....

 

[ben565]

Get a picture of a Cute girl. Rest is upto your sales pitch.

pic of a cute girl may increase your ctr but not your conv rate as the realmature dating site has not cute girls on it.

 

[chin musik]

damn if this is my competition internet marketing is gonna be EZ!