Landing Page Review Request

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Wow, as a programmer I run 1600 x 1200 and I totally overlooked the fact that most people run a much lower resolution. I shortened the story, and image and removed some line breaks so that the buy button is above the fold @ 1280 x 1024. In the process of updating those upsell links.

Thanks...
 


Put a call to action above the fold. Get a header with a high contrast and break down your paragraphs! :)
 
Better, but the text is still too long, the button is on the second page for me.

Also, try breaking up the flow of the text using headings and paragraphs.

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I've pared the text down as far as I think I can, and now the buy button is above the fold at 1024 x 768, which I am guessing is the most common resolution. Testing this offer has been a bit difficult. I have about 50 "long-tailish" keywords, but just not getting many clicks (adWords). I think I will try upping my max CPC.

Thanks again...
 
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