Logo Review Part II

[CLKeenan]

Alright, I've pretty much narrowed it down to these options.

#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

And to give you an idea of the layout they would be going with, here is the design:

Thanks for your input!!

 

[Airkat]

number 5 is the best IMO. maybe move the Headquarters text down a bit so its not "under" the desk. might look better.

 

[trigatch4]

#5 by a landslide victory.

It would REALLY kick ass if you could somehow, behind where the kid is sleeping, put an open door leading to the hallway with lockers in the background. Then I think it would be amazing.

 

[hfgreg]

#4 or #5 i like 5 more yet i think that #4 would work with your layout better.

 

[JoeZ]

I still maintain that you should do #5 but with action as well so it doesn't look boring. Add in the athletes to the mix and it'll be golden.

Else, #2 because of the variety.

 

[CLKeenan]

#5 by a landslide victory.

It would REALLY kick ass if you could somehow, behind where the kid is sleeping, put an open door leading to the hallway with lockers in the background. Then I think it would be amazing.

That might be a little too crazy. I don't know how the designer would manage that. There's not that much space left

And yah, Im definitely going to have the designer move the HEADQUARTERS down a little bit some its not underneath it

 

[CLKeenan]

last up for more feedback

 

[CLKeenan]

no more feedback?

 

[bobby]

I voted for 5..

I think 3 is a distant second to it.

 

[dogfighter]

I voted for 5.

#2 looks too much like they're holding billy clubs or something, and the others focus way too much on the DJ

 

[0352]

I also say go with #5, with the HQ moved down a bit. Then I think you will be golden.

 

[chatmasta]

#5 is the most accurate representation of high school and definitely has the best composition. Second would be #3, I think.

What is this site going to be for? That's an important part.

 

[Andrew]

#5 is good but it could use some modifications. Truthfully I never go crazy on my logos, usually 20-30 minutes from blank Illustrator file to final gif/jpg.

All that really matters in a logo is that there is high contrast so the site name sticks out. The other option is to take the branding approach. The WickedFire logo is a great approach to this. Simple and clean.

I would put the kid leaning back in his chair with a video game controller in hand. Otherwise the illustration should be more stylized and less "cliparty."