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Way too salesy with the whole "salesletter" format. That is what everybody does wrong.
 


why is the indian boy that had a fish swim up his penis riding a pig? it makes no sense next to the words "Obama doesn't want you to know the secrets of..." blah. blah.

mmmmmmmm.

bored. stopped reading the sales copy because it sucks.

'burp'
 
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Looks like someone doesn't like you ripping off their LP,

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