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Your headline is so cliche that you're going to turn away a bunch of people right off the bat.
How is your product going to solve the problems you mention in the bullets?
The writing seems a little choppy in places. If English isn't your native tongue it may be worth it to have someone edit for you.
"You will also be receiving a special ebook, worpress plugins blueprint, for those who sign up today!"
This means nothing to me or anyone else.
"Hurry, offer may probably end soon!" Should be more like...
"This offer
will end soon, get this shit while you can."
You should be using that last paragraph to it's full potential because it's your last chance to sell.
As for the CTA, who the fuck in Jia Bin?
I'm guessing it's you. Sorry buddy but nobody knows or cares who you are.
"bring me to your bonus" desperately needs to be rewritten. I'd also expand the button image to the width of the form fields.
Unlink "We respect your email privacy", it's only going to distract people. Actually I'd rewrite or get rid of it completely.
Hope I've helped.
