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I'm starting my own nitrous oxide delivery service for my local area (Bristol), I've been designing this flyer to advertise at local music events. My target audience are students/party goers.

I want feedback on how to make it more effective, what I should add, what I should take away or even if I should scrap it and try again.

Thanks. (Please move if this is the wrong forum)

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Its legal in the UK, I live in the second largest party city and there's a service in London that offers the same thing and seems to be doing well and has been operating for a while.

I was wondering how I should start over? some tips and advice would be good.

cheers, Dan.
 
It will work, just try it. Everyone here who said it is bad is just putting their principles onto your ad when if you try this, it will probably work. Just try it.

To be honest I think it's bad, but many times I get a landing page designed to IMPRESS ME, when it is probably overkill and something simpler might have worked anyway.
 
ewww what is that behind the words? Is that a brain? Yes remind people of the brain they are frying, that should be good for business.
 
the whole concept is genius, as is the flyer. Leave it as-is.

Drug lords like scarface are over-rated- much better braving the law for quick $4 commissionz and building an empire on the down-low.

Smart. Very smart.
 
wh0re said:
Its legal in the UK, I live in the second largest party city and there's a service in London that offers the same thing and seems to be doing well and has been operating for a while.

I was wondering how I should start over? some tips and advice would be good.

cheers, Dan.
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oh - well good for the Brits- disregard my comment above, good luck. Put some images of people partying then, and stress quick delivery so they don't need to leave the party to obtain.
 
umm...i couldnt stop staring at the thing in the background like turbolapp pointed out....its like a troll or something....dont know how it relates to your product since it doesnt even seem to be laughing... and use different font....other than the picture, the font, the product, and the presentation....you are golden hahahaha
 
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