Review my campaign! LP included

taktikz

taktikz

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Oct 22, 2008
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Estimated Traffic
Google AdWords Keyword Tool: 1,600 (exact searches/month) 6,600 (broad)
WordTracker: 11/day

Total Sites on Google (broad): 1,800,000
Total Sites on Google (exact): 7,210
Total Sites on Google (allintitle): 4,360

Current Google Position: #4

Was in position #10 and #11 before using Angela's packet.

I've gotten 26 clicks to the offer page from my site and 1 sale with a CTR of 3.86%
Not sure if the sale was due to SEO or recommending it on Yahoo Answers/Forums


Here's a Screen Shot of my current LP (changed it after making the sale due to liking this one better)

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There's about a paragraph to a paragraph and a half of info below: Choosing the "Product Name"

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Your input is appreciated
 
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first thing i notice is their isnt much flow for my eyes, we tend to look at websites like a book, we start top left read across and go where our eyes are directed. I would put the featured on these news things next to the product header so you read the header, eye flow across the page and then id switch the form to the otherside so your drawn right down into it
 
If you're running this on Adwords, your QS will soon go to shit and your ads won't show. I haven't had one campaign that will run for more than 3 weeks until it gets a manual review and is killed.
 
Too many (useless) links everywhere. Especially the top header.

Make it look like a clickbank sales page. Can't go wrong, those fucking converts.
 
So, making it look like a site instead of a sales page is no good? I keep hearing mixed opinions. Some say it's better to have a site with different pages then some say it's better to just have a sales page...
 
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