Review My Laptop Site



You might want to make those check marks go down like a vertical list because it looks very messy. Also a small paragraph about what the site is about will help the visitor trust you a bit more, especially since it looks like a site built in the 90's...
 
Step 1 - Slap together a shitty site as best you know how

Step 2 - Post threads on as many forums as possible asking people to review your site

Step 3 - HURR-DURR
 
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Please PM me your designer info so I can hire him to recreate a Geocities kitty fan page and make MASSS $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$.
 
You might want to make those check marks go down like a vertical list because it looks very messy. Also a small paragraph about what the site is about will help the visitor trust you a bit more, especially since it looks like a site built in the 90's...

Thanks for your comments. I originally had the check marks going down vertically but changed them to go across the page so that the content did not take up so much vertical space.

I have written a short intro, but I don't want it too long as that would shift the deals down.

Rgds
 
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Please PM me your designer info so I can hire him to recreate a Geocities kitty fan page and make MASSS $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$.

I do the "design" myself. However, I don't get carried away on making the site look nice, just on making it convert, which it does.

Rgds
 
Obviously your intentions were spam more so than actual feedback, if you don't care about the design in the first place.

No, I am interested in what people have to say, and I do care about the design, but only in terms of "is this design converting", not in terms of "does this look nice". I do think I need to improve the look of the site a bit so that people don't immediately hit the back button. At the moment, I'm sure the basic look will be making a fair few abandon, but for the rest of the visitors then it gets aff link clicks.

Rgds
 
I do the "design" myself. However, I don't get carried away on making the site look nice, just on making it convert, which it does.

Rgds

No offense...but the design is 1990's. If you dont get carried away by the design then why post a thread asking what we think about your site in the first place if you know it converts??
 
It does make sales however ;)

Rgds


Don't take it personal. Just improve the design (make it clean, make the actionable items you want the USER to do, pop on the page). Just up your game. I never said you weren't making money, BUT, if you are making say $100/day, a good, professional design could change that to $200/day.