oh what the fuck, this is the newbies section.
Header: you have no header. no catch line. nothing to hook anyone in. your strongest benefit should be here nice and big for everyone to read easily
Copy: it's terrible. no descriptive or engaging copy, even if people were hooked in theres nothing to keep them in. change things like "lots of money" to "$3563.34 a week!" or better yet, hire a good copywriter here on WF.
Testimonials: nothing. no proof of your shit actually working. give out review copies to some Warrior or DP sheep, or make up your own testimonials
Design: did you make this in paint? font is hard to read, your arrows point to useless pictures of yourself with the vice president at some campaign event and dinner with your friends? you know you can get pretty sick designs here on WF for pretty cheap.
Price: $11? too cheap. dont expect any CB affiliates to promote your product even if you're offering 75%.
