My first music video
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keep it up. it's always a nice feeling completing a song.
if i had one gripe, it felt more like a teaser than a full song. i'd extend it at least 1 more minute, integrate some sort of breakdown / 1 time chorus where the song normally ends around 2:00, then revert back to the original beat and end it; but of course i know that's a lot more work.
if i had one gripe, it felt more like a teaser than a full song. i'd extend it at least 1 more minute, integrate some sort of breakdown / 1 time chorus where the song normally ends around 2:00, then revert back to the original beat and end it; but of course i know that's a lot more work.
The melody in the background is "borrowed" from somewhere, can't remember which song exactly.
Overall good song, video could have been clearer, without the clouds, but still great for the first music video and song. Keep it up bro!
Overall good song, video could have been clearer, without the clouds, but still great for the first music video and song. Keep it up bro!
Got it.
[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhuGQUZJot8]Alicia Keys - Un-thinkable (I'm Ready) - YouTube[/ame]
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[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhuGQUZJot8]Alicia Keys - Un-thinkable (I'm Ready) - YouTube[/ame]
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nice track, but the lip syncing is out of sync at time and I find there's too much footage of yourself (may be looking for "Tyler The Creator" feel?), would be good to mix it up a bit. 8/10 definitely doesn't look amateur at all.
Overall, really good!
Beat/flow/lyrics wise, what dreamache said.
Video, I would cut the fading in/out/clouds sequence by like 80% and replace it with you doing different things than sitting down. Walking around, feeling up some prostitute, whatever..
Beat/flow/lyrics wise, what dreamache said.
Video, I would cut the fading in/out/clouds sequence by like 80% and replace it with you doing different things than sitting down. Walking around, feeling up some prostitute, whatever..
Thanks man.
The out of sync effect was what I wanted. We filmed with the track sped up, and the camera at a high frame rate to get a slow motion effect.
Mad respek. I like how you're being yourself and doing your own style. I really like your shit tbh. Every other rapper who plays me/shows me their shit it's usually so cliche it makes me want to blow my brains out.
I consider myself a pretty well seasoned hip-hop/rap enthusiast too, so I think I have a good idea of what's good and what's not, and I like the shit you post here. Good job
I consider myself a pretty well seasoned hip-hop/rap enthusiast too, so I think I have a good idea of what's good and what's not, and I like the shit you post here. Good job
