Pittsburgh Pimpin'...

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Pittsburgh Pimpin'
Oct 14, 2008
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Critique this:

Just wanted to give a quick look at my young homey D Yung's new video. I've been out of the music biz for a minute, but it keeps on calling....

Let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is expected and appreciated.

http://youtu.be/3tEJgIIObl8
 
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Beat is nice, lyrics are on point. Dude definitely has potential.

"i ain't a crip or a blood, but i blew money on red bottoms" hahah good shit
 
when it comes to rap/hip hop Im more of a top 40 type, dont know too much detail about styles and whatever critics that makes a rapper hard core and respected in that area.

just a few points...

1. aint these guys supposed to have friends with them in the video?
2. aint there supposed to be an excessive amount of bling and raining cash?
3. was that stripper with the nice azz to expensive to get more then just a hug out of here?
 
The beat and the song is pretty cool. The video is quite cliché IMO - don't get me wrong, it's cool and looks well shot but I could find 5 hip-hop songs with pretty much the same video - shots of skylines, in a limo, with a hot girl.

1. aint these guys supposed to have friends with them in the video?
1. Read the title of the video - he's alone in Vegas :p.