Embarrassing, seriously. I never neg rep people, but the audacity to think this is the 'official' music video of affiliate marketing or whatever really makes me want to. It's not even that hard to make a music video, dude.
Use the actual song as the backtrack. Sprinkle in some slowmo. You can use black and white a lot, that looks 'artsy'. You don't show some dump with a tool in a ski cap and a ridiculous cigar in his hand with a random TV below him running a slideshow. You have to have different themes with different scenes. And there's a certain filter they put on the scenes that makes it look more like a movie and less like a home video. And there has to be actual...video editing. I.e., not a video camera on a tripod. I mean, shit a pure amateur could do that basic stuff without any experience and it would look ten times better.
And WTF is up with your enunciation? Your jaw doesn't move at all when you speak. People can't match the lyrics they're hearing with what your mouth is doing because whatever your mouth is doing just looks bizarre.