Can someone kindly critique my Facebook dating ad?

[chrisjay]

It's slightly profitable but the CTR sucks at 0.01%

How do I improve my CTR?

 

[BluAffiliate]

Not sure if serious.

 

[jeffrey]

In all seriousness- find a more attractive woman.

 

[JoseArmando]

CTR & Profitability never lie.

 

[Coldchill]

Nice way to spam, lets see if he replies.

 

[moneypartners]

ya seems like spam

 

[TheDean]

In all seriousness- find someone that doesn't look like a cracked out hag amputee version of the lead singer of 4 non blondes...

FYP.

 

[DreFromThaBay]

LOL!

 

[chrisjay]

Spam what?

I'm just asking for suggestions to improve.

I'm new to this.

 

[Chianti]

This is you chasing facebook monies:

Oh, sorry. Didn't see the word 'kindly' in your title.
Seriously, you need to split test dozens of ads.
Look for WiredNiko's journal to see how hard it is.

 

[KristofferSEO]

Hey chrisjay. There really isn't much we can tell you about your ad. All you have to do is test it, test it and then test some more.

When you feel like you have reached the point where your ad is as profitable as it'll get. Test some more.

 

[Fiver]

It's slightly profitable but the CTR sucks at 0.01%

How do I improve my CTR?

How in the hell could it be profitable at .01%?

I'm calling bullshit.

 

[foxcore]

If I were you I would find more attractive ladies, she looks horrid.

 

[foxcore]

and you are targeting "realmaturesingles" she doesnt look mature.

 

[kingfish]

In soviet russia men interested to date single women!

 

[seomafia]

You need to test HUNDREDS of variations. The Women, the ad copy, everything. And I call BS, no way your profitable at 0.01 CTR

 

[Torgo]

You need to test HUNDREDS of variations. The Women, the ad copy, everything. And I call BS, no way your profitable at 0.01 CTR

he probably got 5 clicks before it completely died and 1 converted out of pure luck

op: test more ads

 

[blogspotter]

How in the hell could it be profitable at .01%?

I'm calling bullshit.

He is using a coupon

 

[o hai guyz]

1) The girl is ugly as shit. All you have to do is type "hot girl" into Google Images, it's not that hard.

2) Your sentence structure is wrong. It should say "Meet single women interested in dating men!" However, it's a very poorly written sentence either way.

3) What's up with the dots at the end?

4) I'm gonna take a wild guess and say you didn't target it correctly.

 

[sbailey013]

Swap it out with this image and you should see better CTR's

No in all seriousness I would rather have Linda Blair blow me with her head twisted 180 degrees than meet up with that dyslexic crackhead looking lady.