Overall I liked it ->
1) If you told me about how long it would take before I could do my own site that would help me decide to do it. Maybe reference a testomonial or two like -'I had my site done in 2 days after I DL'd these vids' - or whatever amount of time a motivated person could do it in. BTW tests show a first and last name and a location make testimonials more convincing.
2) Price seems great- you might consider split test a couple of different prices.
3) As someone who has sold face to face for a few years now, I can say from firsthand experience that all the sales training experts are right -- you must build value first, and then you give the price.
4) I liked the video a lot -u seem loose- I did not detect any bullshit... u believe in what u are offering.
5) Thats a tough one- I know u want people to see ur vid... I'd probably leave it as it is- run it as soon as the page loads.
6) You should "sell" more of what it does than what it is - having said that it is a respectable sales job.
7) You could try a classified ad in a couple of specialty magazines -> (the ones just for the following as an example; the rates are cheap) chiropractors advertise a lot and their site always suck, lawyers too and maybe plastic surgeons... play up the fact that their staff and NOT necesarily themselves could pick this up fast and do a topself job.
8) If it had a backend product I'd promote it.
9) You use ur name a lot on the page. You keep saying nine yrs. mix it up... I've desiged 789 sites, yeras & years of web design. Do ot say learn that sounds like work --say discover or see. Also do not say here's how you benefit & the benefits are-- go with something along the lines of look at what you get- & remember for each fearture give a benefit & if u can the advantage of having that benifit. We call this a F.A.Bb presentation. features,advan tages,benefits.
Hope this helps, I don't want free access I still have nitemares of teaching myself HTML a few years ago... Good Luck