True.
OP got 1500+ clicks so his ad copy is golden. Meaning his LP is doo doo. He needs to work on that end
if i wrote the headline "jessica simpson sex tape" on a page that sold plumbing services even with 1500 clicks the conversion sucks dick.
here's what you need to do op, go to amazon or your favorite local torrent and download scientific advertising. damn near 95% of what people do online nowadays was developed by copywriters before 1950, they knew what the fuck they were doing and that book can serve as a solid foundation.
[ame=http://www.amazon.com/Scientific-Advertising-Claude-C-Hopkins/dp/1434102467]Amazon.com: Scientific Advertising (9781434102461): Claude C. Hopkins: Books[/ame]