Dear sweet jebus, the OP (that's you, Brian) has made so many crimes against intelligence here that I just feel the need to tidy up the place just a bit, summarize, & perhaps give quick tip or two...
1. OP: We all make grammar mistakes daily around here. It's normal, people are human. However, your grammar, spelling, and many other types of mistakes here give us all multiple reasons to laugh at you heartily. They're really over the top! You seem to be a professional clown that thinks he's a network owner.
2. The word "Grammar" is misspelled in the title where you asked what was wrong with your grammar... Lulz bonus x2!
3. The reason everyone picks on your grammar mistakes in the first place is because you have made SO DAMN MANY of them that you have passed a threshold that we've never seen before... A threshold that most 3rd graders could easily pass. (Hinting at the fact that you're not even as smart as a 3rd grader.)
4. Incredibly, you run a network, which like any small business takes a lot of work and some brains. This fact made 99% of us pause and wonder if you might not be as stupid as your grammar let on, but then we read that this is your 3rd attempt at a network and it is still riddled with holes like that crappily-grammared email and your site's poor SEO... So it would seem that you are that dumb afterall.
5. Another major hint to your intelligence level is the ungodly amount of personal information you have put out there on a public forum or two. There's no other excuse for that, it's just stupid.
6. Worst of all, adding epic lulz to all of this, you went on the Warrior Forum, a place we associate with the very most stupid of all newbies online, and asked them for advice on how to do your business! Oh the humanity! Make it stop, make it stop!!!
In conclusion, OP, you are either the most stupid person who's ever logged onto the internet, or this is the best, most elaborate troll job yet in WF history.
Which is it?